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@Brandon Barrows Thank you! :D I hope you continue to enjoy it!
By: Wren on Thu, 17 December 2015 18:22:33
 
I just read the first 60 some-odd chapters in one sitting and I am really enjoying this. Wonderful work. Keep it up!
By: Brandon Barrows  Brandon Barrows is a Textnovel supporter  on Thu, 17 December 2015 10:53:22
 
@Danny You're so sweet! Thank you for reading! :)
By: Wren on Tue, 13 October 2015 09:33:34
 
Gimme more! I'm really excited about this one. Read the first chapter and i can't put it down. awesome work keep it coming :)
By: Danny Tay on Tue, 13 October 2015 03:53:28
 
@RinK Thank you so much!
By: Wren on Sat, 10 October 2015 16:49:23
 
I love this! Can't stop reading! It's very absorbing.
By: RinK on Sat, 10 October 2015 01:27:45
 
@Coralie LOL thank you xD I feel like this will be my new Newton's Grove in a way. I'm hoping this will be the next one I complete.
By: Wren on Mon, 28 September 2015 10:32:54
 
I love the way you build your characters! You make them look real and you paint their feelings and emotions with so much ease.

Ana, for example, is mentally and emotionally unstable, and this can be easily seen from the way she expresses herself, one moment saying something, the next talking about an entirely different thing. Her thoughts are tangled and she is a mess. Definitely a strong character. Naruo is interesting too. A young adult loving a teen.

This piece reminds me a bit of your "Newton Grove", too. It is the same writing style, more or less. Just that this time is from a girl's POV.

Despite the confusing parts, where Ana shows us her delusions and mental instability, the writing is poetic and delicate.

Oh, and before I forget, your metaphors are great. You managed to make use of the aesthetic of the ugly and twist it around, creating some great imagery.

I wanna see how this develops later on. The triangle you drew is quite interesting and I don't think I've ever read this kind of story before.

By the way, I like how you ended the 70th chapter.

Keep it up, and update soon~!
By: Hirondelle on Mon, 28 September 2015 10:18:20
 
Thank you! I'm so happy that you like it <3
By: Wren on Thu, 27 August 2015 13:09:51
 
Another strong piece from you! I noticed you changed your style, and God, it's so good! I just can't have enough of it. There are a lot of feelings and emotions swimming through the words, and certainly the reader gets easily engaged. Keep up the good work! I'm hyped. Update sooon!!!
By: Cosette on Thu, 27 August 2015 12:42:48
 
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