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It might have helped me to read your notes first where you explained the short chapters. I'm sorry, not used to cell phone​ novels. Still, I look forward to reading all of this one.
By: Mr. F_4 on Wed, 17 May 2017 01:00:12
 
Wow, you have a way with words! I'm on chapter 12 so far. This story flows so we'll! I like that the chapters are short but I don't feel that their division is natural for the reader. That's a minor complaint since an author can choose however they would like to have their chapters divided. I guess mine tend to be too long. Anyways, this story is intriguing and you are a very talented writer. I am usually not into first person narratives but because it's coming from a mother character and because she clearly has an interesting voice, I am enjoying it a lot. Can't wait to see what happens.
By: Mr. F_4 on Wed, 17 May 2017 00:58:01
 
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