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I like the way Risa and Kyuushi's love story is described, even their normal lifestyles! It feels so real... and the summer with your writing style is neverending! Please, update! I want to know more! X3
By: Wiegenlied on Sat, 13 December 2014 09:32:59
 
OMG WHAT YOU'RE BACK??!!!! YOU UPDATED!!! OMG I BEEN WAITING FOR YOU I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH <333333 one of the masterpieces that influenced me from years ago <3
By: TAKATSU  TAKATSU is a Textnovel supporter  on Wed, 05 June 2013 09:32:06
 
It's been so many years but I really love this story so much. Please more chapters!!! lol its an english literary masterpiece xD
By: TAKATSU  TAKATSU is a Textnovel supporter  on Tue, 30 April 2013 14:25:58
 
Your use of the English language is fantastic. The way you use the words to describe things is magical- Your words flow so nicely
By: kathleen ball  kathleen ball is a Textnovel supporter  on Thu, 25 March 2010 16:57:09
 
Thanks for all the nice comments!
I feel proud if you praise me since I'm not a native speaker...

@Napris: Yeah, I took it from that manga. I found it after I googled Cell Phone Novels and read a bit into it. I don't like it that much, but the name sounded nice so I took it.
By: Mahagony on Thu, 25 March 2010 14:00:04
 
Ahh!! Your username!! Watashi ni Shinasai ^^ - the manga's why I went looking up cell phone novels ... and then I saw your name!! :O
By: Napris on Wed, 17 March 2010 22:18:32
 
Great story. So glad to see another Cell Phone Novel on the site. Keep it up. It's really good. One suggestion might be that your vertical style of writing and some of the cuts in the sentences might be a bit awkward for some readers and could possibly break up the fluidity of the reading. Something you might want to look into and consider. Otherwise, it's great and I look forward to seeing what else happens. ;)
By: Matthew Reeves on Thu, 28 January 2010 21:55:59
 
Another Masterpiece of a Japanese cell phone novel. I just love the genre and all the different styles of our cell phone novelists. Textnovel definitely is bringing together new age novelists of the most amazing caliber. Keep this up. I love your writing style, and really brings you into the atmosphere and setting of the novel. It reminds me of happy summer days and brings me into a place of paradise where there are no worries, except for about having fun and love and friendship. Amazing. I love it.
By: TAKATSU  TAKATSU is a Textnovel supporter  on Thu, 28 January 2010 17:43:11
 
Oh. I really like this! Interesting! :D Good job, keep it up!
By: Karra Christina  Karra Christina is a Textnovel supporter  on Thu, 28 January 2010 17:36:22
 
Nice premise. Promise of an excellent story.
By: JoanHallHovey  JoanHallHovey is a Textnovel supporter  on Fri, 25 December 2009 10:12:16
 
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