Enchanted with you : by ergelina :: Genre : Cell Phone Novel

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Enchanted with you by: ergelina

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Sorry for not updating for a while but I was pretty busy with my internship..so now that I'm back at school I have time to continue it. (A) I know that I did start "Forbidden Love" a few days ago but that was during one of the days I had a free time....I should seriously finish my stories...^^'..
By: ergelina on Mon, 28 March 2011 10:44:09

Thank you, Piko-chan! Can you help me out with those grammar mistakes? :) And other as well, if you see grammar mistakes then private message me about them and I'll fix them. :).
By: ergelina on Thu, 24 February 2011 14:03:34

I like the story. It has a good flow and seems to be going somewhere, however there are a lot of grammer mistakes. Fix those and the story could be much, much better. .
By: Piko Yagami on Thu, 24 February 2011 12:29:39

Thanks! And sorry for not updating it for a long time!...And my constant editions...
By: ergelina on Tue, 22 February 2011 12:52:26

nice writing!!.
By: kathleen ball on Mon, 21 February 2011 16:47:53

so I guess that the longer chapters are alright? .
By: ergelina on Wed, 16 February 2011 13:15:58

:) Only thing is please review your grammar, there is a switch between present and past tense throughout your work. Tense has to be consistent with all your verbs. I like the present tense verbs in your writing better. Nevertheless it still has a great writing style and tone, so keep working at it and improving it!.
By: takatsu on Wed, 16 February 2011 13:07:55

Oh my god! I'm still unable to believe it! I'd never expected it! Thank you so much!.
By: ergelina on Wed, 16 February 2011 13:03:04

Congrats! I'm happy for you! I love this story, very delicate and simple, but has a strong air of elegance. Keep it up! Let the story flow with your characters, let them guide your story. -Taka.
By: takatsu on Wed, 16 February 2011 10:48:34

Congrats!!!.
By: kathleen ball on Wed, 16 February 2011 08:58:48

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Chapter 1:- Change of a Season
Winter usually means a lot of snow,
Christmas and New Year.

Until recently I spent almost all of
my Christmases with my family.

It was also during the winter when we met.
Was it a fact or just a pure coincidence?

I don't know.
But I do know that I'm grateful to you.

For giving me those wonderful memories,
for letting me to know what (true) love is.

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