Fun and addicting. Please continue! :) It was just getting good!.
By:Tilladeonon
Wed, 21 October 2009 15:27:32
I like this. Lovely style, really pulls me in..
By:Sheila Deethon
Sun, 13 September 2009 19:29:24
i love your rhythmic way of narration, it's like your poems.. i've always been a fan of your writing! it's so beautiful. keep it up! .
By:takatsuon
Sat, 08 August 2009 20:59:04
This one has hooked me; I like the concept, and you write well..
By:RLB Hartmannon
Thu, 06 August 2009 17:27:15
Life and love has never been more complicated for May, and let's face it, she was hopeless at romance even when it only affected one world.
Foreword/Preface
Please tell me if I start switching tenses. :(
I'll try to get some pictures up and italicize what I need to, but I haven't had a lot of free time (read: no free time) lately.
Chapter 4:- Full Moon
It's too late... the villagers whispered.
This war has gone on far too long, and
it's taken its toll. The wall is too thin,
and the enchantments too old.
Any day, they said, any day, and our worlds
could collide.