Secondhand Memories 「むかしのおもいで」 : by takatsu

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Secondhand Memories 「むかしのおもいで」 by: takatsu takatsu is a Textnovel supporter

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Oh my, I have the same name as one of the characters in the story. That makes me feel as if I'm living in the story too, great work here! I can't stop reading it. I'm itching to get to book 2. .
By: Juria on Wed, 04 April 2012 03:52:20

I love this♥ It's really interesting and I can't stop reading:>.
By: Keito on Wed, 07 March 2012 06:58:06

aww thanks for reading it :) glad to hear it haha even though its been such a long time, i'm glad to see new readers... i really need to get back on top of all this.
By: takatsu on Tue, 31 January 2012 21:11:39

This story has been pulling on my heart strings. I have spent the last three days reading it none stop, only taking breaks when I had to work haha. It got me so caught up in the moments of the story, I felt like I could really feel the characters emotions. Wow, I can't wait to see where it goes next!!.
By: myrindaside on Sun, 29 January 2012 19:09:16

Thanks for the comment! Dabara, that was totally what I wished to do for readers. It's very encouraging for you to say that. I feel guilty for not continuing to write and edit and finish book one and book two. I would like to continue to do so. But to inspire and bless others is always most important to me. I'm glad it encouraged you!.
By: takatsu on Sun, 22 January 2012 13:17:43

Nice story! It always made me curious after I read it chapter by chapter and somehow my spirit goes up after finished reading one chapter. Each chapter like somehow taught me not too give up. I like this story. Thanks for the story Takatsu! .
By: Dabara on Wed, 18 January 2012 07:35:29

awesome story!! XD .
By: Keiko-chan on Thu, 24 November 2011 08:44:28

I'm only about eight chapters in, but it's really interesting. I didn't think I'd like cell phone novels, but I'm glad I was at least willing to try this one!.
By: Juliette Hart on Sun, 06 November 2011 16:58:01

Yay! Yur back and updating. .
By: S.N. Parish on Thu, 06 October 2011 10:26:12

Nice story^^.
By: Nora Knowing on Tue, 20 September 2011 12:29:30

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Chapter 23:- Phone Call
I headed across the rooftop and got to the fence on one side.
My fist slammed into the fence in all abandon.

The fence shook and rattled.
Damn it. I closed my eyes.

For a few moments there was silence.
I could only feel the sun on my neck.

Silence didn’t help. It made things worse.

I didn’t know what to think or what to feel.
The last few minutes had been so unreal.
Was it the heat?

My mind, my mind was blank.
But at the same time it was a whirlpool that I couldn’t make any sense of.

I could only hear the words of the man that called echo over and over.
A monotone drone, every word a hammer against my skull.
I could only hear my own heart pounding, rumbling through my body.

I wanted to cry, I wanted to shout, I wanted something, anything.
But nothing came. I tried to picture Aoi-chan in my head but there was nothing.

I desperately tried to remember her face,
her soft hair,
her warm hand in mine,
her head against my shoulder,
her smile, but there was nothing.

The only thing left now were the thoughts that spun in my head.

What if I could never see her again?
What if I couldn’t see her smile again?
Feel her fingertips against my palm?
What if I couldn’t hold her again?

It dawned on me how precious she was to me.
Only I suddenly realized that I hadn’t cherished her enough.

The ground rose to meet my helpless body.

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