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OH. I love the new edit for it! Though I've already said it on twitter -- I like this cause it really draws you in better! The choppiness, the quickness of the sentences. Like it IS cold! Like the character is REALLY FEELING it! I love that! :D And I also like the last few lines. Kind of like a dark foreshadowing (or light, I'm not sure, I don't know if you can view much dark in a Christmas-esque sounding story. XD). Love, love, LOVE IT! .
Tue, 23 February 2010 23:24:19
Fri, 05 February 2010 23:45:18